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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: INT. TYLER’S BEDROOM – NIGHT Rebecca brings a sobbing Tyler to the bed and sits with him. REBECCA Listen to me Tyler, you don’t have to go through this alone. I’m right here with you. TYLER Nothing is going to make this any better. I’ve screwed up my life big time. REBECCA You did not. TYLER Yes I did. I screwed up Andrew’s life too. I should have told him we were brothers as soon as I found out. But stupid me, I was only thinking about myself. I told myself how much it would hurt Brandy to find out we split for nothing. She had to abort our child because of a mistake. Brandy was not the same person after that and I told myself it would destroy her to learn we split for nothing. But I wasn’t thinking about her, I was thinking of myself. I was afraid she’d hate me and blame the whole mix up on me. REBECCA Listen to me Tyler. None of that was your fault. Brandy would not have blamed you. TYLER We’ll never find that out now, will we? REBECCA She’s not dead. Miles believes that with all his heart. When he finds her, she’ll have him to get her through this; just like you have me to help you through it. She wraps her arms around him. TYLER Don’t ever bring up Miles around me! He shoves Rebecca off him. She tumbles from the bed and hits the floor hard. TYLER (continuing) Oh God, Rebecca, I’m so sorry! INT. DAKOTA’S LIVING ROOM – NIGHT Dakota and Andrew talk. ANDREW Sure thing, you’ll get Ciel back for me. How do you think that’s going to happen? DAKOTA Faith, my boy! I always have a plan. ANDREW Of course. Maybe I’ll try to kill Brad again. Or better, I could kidnap Ciel and hold her prisoner. That should get her to love me again. DAKOTA Don’t be silly Andrew. We just have to discredit Brad in her eyes and make you into the hero again. ANDREW Good luck with that! I already tried the hero thing and it didn’t work. DAKOTA That’s because Brad was still the victim. Take that away, and he won’t stand a chance. ANDREW I’m listening. DAKOTA Ciel is still a high school girl and she still has that rosy, cheery outlook on what life should be. Brad is a poor high school graduate who can’t afford college. How will Ciel react when he suddenly has more money than he knows what to do with? ANDREW So we make Brad out to be a thief? DAKOTA Even better! And his job at Buff’s Gym makes this so much more believable. EXT. STORAGE BIN – NIGHT Scott comes to and eases himself up. He turns around to find Jake standing over him. JAKE You’re gonna get hurt snooping in my dad’s business. SCOTT I should have known! You haven’t changed, Jake! JAKE Oh, you don’t think I was the one who attacked you? SCOTT And you don’t expect me to believe it’s coincidence you’re here? Jake holds out his hand. JAKE With what? What did I attack you with? SCOTT Don’t play that. I was probably out long enough for you to get rid of the weapon. JAKE Scott, I have no reason to! If I was involved in Dad’s schemes, it’s too late to protect whatever was in here. The FBI raided this bin! Any evidence is already gone. SCOTT You’re lying! JAKE See for yourself then. Jake unlocks the bin and opens the door. Scott looks from Jake to the blackened room. FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: INT. TONY’S BAR AND GRILL – NIGHT Brad and Ciel take seats at a table. CIEL You didn’t have to take me out Brad. I know you just started working and need to save money. BRAD It’s nothing, Ciel. After you watched over me in the hospital, I figured I owed you this. Besides, my dad gave me money to eat on my first day of work. It’s just enough for a couple burgers and some water. Ciel chuckles. CIEL I hear this place has the best water in town. BRAD I don’t know why I never noticed before how cute you are when you laugh. Wait, I know why. It’s cause I was such a jerk in high school. CIEL Forget high school, Brad. That’s all over now. BRAD For me, sure. Not for you though which by the way, I won’t keep you out too late tonight. She chuckles again. CIEL Don’t worry about that. I have study hall first period to sleep in. INT. STORAGE BIN – NIGHT Jake turns on a light revealing a stockpile of exercise equipment. Scott stands outside the door. JAKE Are you coming Scott? I thought you wanted to see what’s in here. Scott steps inside. SCOTT This all your dad’s? JAKE It’s not mine. SCOTT (mumbling) That much is obvious. JAKE What did you say? SCOTT Nothing. Why does Dakota have all this? JAKE Maybe cause he’s a bodybuilder, dumbass. SCOTT Watch it! Your dad has a personal gym at his house. Everything from his commercial gym was destroyed in the fire. Same with the stuff he had in his cabin. JAKE Guess he just likes to workout. SCOTT NO, this isn’t right. That man keeps a full gym in every building he owns. Yet he’s got another set of equipment in storage. JAKE Maybe it’s for a vacation home he hasn’t bought yet. I thought we were here for clues about your sister. What does my Dad’s exercise equipment have to do with that? SCOTT Maybe he wants to set up a gym wherever he’s holding Brandy. I’m sure it wasn’t planned to hold her prisoner. JAKE Sorry Scott, but this is getting weird. You make it sound like my Dad is kidnapping people to make them workout. If that’s so, he should be casing McDonalds. Scott removes the brand plate from a bench. JAKE (continuing) Great! You broke it! SCOTT That wasn’t supposed to happen. Companies don’t put their name all over a product to have it come off the first time you use it. This should have been attached better. JAKE That’s what you get for trying to remove it. SCOTT You don’t get it, Jake. This bench is a fake. JAKE A fake bench! Must be for fake lifts! SCOTT A fake bench, meaning someone’s passing off a cheap bench as a top quality model. If Dakota is dealing in bootleg exercise equipment, we may find a clue to Brandy’s whereabouts from wherever this stuff comes from. INT. TYLER’S BEDROOM – NIGHT Tyler stands over Rebecca lying on the floor. TYLER I’m sorry. I’m so sorry Rebecca, I never meant to. Rebecca kicks him in the shin. She climbs from the floor and punches him in the face. Tyler goes down at which she proceeds to kick him. REBECCA Don’t you ever lay a hand on me you bastard! How dare you? After I helped you through a rough time in your life! I can’t believe I was going to fight the memory of your missing ex for your love. I can’t believe I ever fell in love with you to begin with! She runs from the room. From the floor, a bloody Tyler coughs out more blood. TYLER Rebecca, forgive me. I’m so sorry. FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: INT. TYLER’S BATHROOM – DAY Andrew sneaks in and starts rummaging through the cabinets. ANDREW Good thing Tyler isn’t home. Means I can do this without worrying about him telling me how much he wants to be a family. He closes the cabinet. ANDREW (continuing) I know he keeps his drugs in here! He eyes the garbage. Fishing through it, he digs out an empty ampule. ANDREW (continuing) Not the same, but this should work. INT. BUFF’S LOCKER ROOM – DAY Buff cleans the blood from Tyler’s face. Tyler fights back tears. BUFF You want to tell me how this happened? TYLER It doesn’t matter. Rebecca left me last night. BUFF What happened? TYLER It’s my fault. It’s all my fault. I’m a horrible person. BUFF You don’t believe that! TYLER Rebecca left me cause I shoved her…hard. She fell off the bed and slammed the floor. I’ve been so angry lately. I almost beat up Andrew yesterday, and last night I shoved a woman! BUFF And she did this to you. TYLER I deserve it. BUFF You know the steroids will do that to you. They heighten your aggressiveness. TYLER But I haven’t been on them long enough! The steroids didn’t make me do this! I’ve been falling apart ever since Brandy went missing. After we split, I tried to get over her. I was supposed to be her brother, but when Andrew came into the picture and we found out I was not related to her I struggled. I wanted her back, but I couldn’t break up her and Miles. I certainly couldn’t put her through the pain that everything had been ruined for nothing. Now, now that she’s gone, I can’t even make that choice. I may never know if there’s a chance we can be together. BUFF Sounds like the problem, Tyler, is you’re under a lot of stress. You need to stop beating yourself up. Brandy will be found and you will get your chance to make things right. TYLER What if we don’t find her? What if Brandy never comes home, then what? INT. BUFF’S LIVING ROOM – DAY Dakota sits on the couch eating a plate of eggs. Cookie enters. DAKOTA Welcome home dear. Did you bring her back? COOKIE She wouldn’t come! DAKOTA What! Did you explain things to her? COOKIE Oh she got it all right. But she has some things to do before she’s ready to come back! What am I going to do Dakota? That custody hearing is coming up soon. I don’t think I can win this unless she’s back for it. DAKOTA Cookie, it’s not the end of the world if she misses the hearing. Carlos has enough black marks we can use against him. I promise you won’t lose your daughter to him. COOKIE Still, it would help having that woman there. INT. BIG J LABS – DAY Jake and Scott sit at the desk in an otherwise empty room. Liz enters. JAKE What happened, Liz? I thought you were supposed to keep me busy while Scott snooped around that storage bin? LIZ (to Scott) I knew this would happen, Scott! I warned you to stay away from it! SCOTT Well, it’s not Jake we need to worry about. LIZ What do you mean? SCOTT I hate to say it, Liz, but it’s true. He opened the bin for me last night, and he’s been helping me all morning. JAKE It’s true. Did you know my Dad is selling bootleg gym equipment? LIZ That’s ridiculous! Why would anyone do that? Gym equipment is so bulky and heavy. Would be easier and quicker to sell drugs. SCOTT Yeah, but there’s almost no risk. Gym owners are looking for the cheapest equipment they can find. And it’s not like the government investigates this kind of thing. Dakota can operate completely under the radar. JAKE That’s why I’m helping Scott locate all the gyms in the city. SCOTT Where he’s storing equipment in Brighton Falls, it’s obvious he has local buyers. LIZ I have a bad feeling about this, Scott. FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: INT. GYM LOBBY – DAY Typical health club set-up. At the desk is a middle-aged WOMAN who seems more interested in her fashion magazine than in her surroundings. Scott and Jake enter and approach the desk. JAKE We’re looking for the manager. WOMAN That’s me, hun. What do you want? JAKE I want to buy some equipment. Can you tell me where you get yours? WOMAN That’s none of your business. Who are you two? SCOTT Sorry for my friend’s abruptness. I’m Scott Hutchens and this is Jake Gent. A friend of ours owns Buff’s Gym in San Tallo. He’s looking to replace some of his equipment. WOMAN Why can’t he use his supplier? SCOTT Money. Membership is down and his usual dealers hiked their prices. He can’t afford what they want, but he needs new equipment. The locals tell me your equipment is top notch. I’m sure your supplier would be very grateful for the referral. WOMAN I’m sure he would. Come back in a half hour. If your story checks out, I’ll give you the number of the guy we deal with. Scott and Jake exchange worried glances. EXT. GYM – DAY Outside in the parking lot, Liz talks on her cell phone. LIZ (into her phone) I don’t know how he found out about this? I already tried to stop him from going into that bin, but he got in anyway. How am I supposed to stop him from investigating this? I know the plan will be ruined if he keeps it up. But I don’t know how to stop him! SCOTT (O.S.) Stop him from what? Liz turns to find Scott and Jake behind her. She disconnects the call. SCOTT Who are you talking to? INT. BUFF’S LOCKER ROOM – DAY Alone in the room, a frustrated Tyler punches the lockers. TYLER Why is this happening to me? Buff enters with Carlos. BUFF Sorry I had to leave you, but look who I found in the lobby. TYLER Carlos! You’re home already. BUFF I’ll let you two talk. Buff leaves. CARLOS You don’t look good, what happened to you, Tyler? TYLER It’s nothing. How was the honeymoon? CARLOS It was great! We stayed in Cancun, in the hotel mostly, but we did manage a side trip to visit my parents. Candy got along great with my mother. I had no idea she spoke Spanish so at least I didn’t need to translate the whole trip. TYLER You weren’t gone all that long. It’s not like the two of you have formal jobs to come back to. CARLOS No, but that damn custody hearing is soon. We had to come back to prepare my case. TYLER It shouldn’t be too hard to win with Cookie’s track record. CARLOS Yeah, but she’s married to Dakota. Probably using his money to hire the best lawyer. And Dakota? Bet he’d love to see me lose that case. I don’t doubt there’s some bombshell he’s waiting to drop. INT. BUFF’S LOBBY – DAY Candice hangs around at the door. Dakota talks on the phone. DAKOTA (into the phone) Yes, Scott is working for me. I’m looking for a bench tested to 2000 pounds, two barbells tested to 1400, and a cable machine with lat and seated row stations. Candice spies something outside. CANDICE What the heck? EXT. PARKING LOT – DAY Andrew crouches beside Brad’s pick-up truck. He takes the empty ampule from his pocket. ANDREW Looks like Brad was stupid enough to leave his truck unlocked. Will be easy to hide this for Ciel to find. A hand falls on his shoulder. He looks up to find Candice standing over him. CANDICE What do you think you’re doing? FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: EXT. BUFF’S GYM – DAY Beside Brad’s truck, Candice looks over a crouching Andrew. He rises. CANDICE You want to tell me what you’re doing lurking by this truck? ANDREW I’m not stealing anything if that’s what you think. CANDICE Then what are you doing? ANDREW I’ll tell you, but you gotta promise not to say anything. CANDICE You’re Tyler’s brother, aren’t you? ANDREW That jerk will never be my brother! CANDICE I’m sorry. Just tell me what you’re up to out here. ANDREW This kid is trying to steal my girlfriend. I figured if I planted a condom in his glove compartment, she might get the wrong idea about him. CANDICE Oh god, you know what, forget I asked. I don’t want to know about this. She heads back to the gym. Andrew takes the ampule from his pocket. ANDREW It’s not a condom, but this will be better. He enters the truck and opens the glove compartment. He places the ampule inside, then takes an envelope from his pocket. Opening the envelope reveals a wad of cash. ANDREW (continuing) And thanks to my dad’s generous gift, this should clinch it. INT. BUFF’S LOCKER ROOM – DAY Carlos and Tyler talk. TYLER I wouldn’t worry about Dakota ruining you shot at custody. He’s still under investigation, so his testimony won’t hold much weight. And I hear judges are considering fathers’ rights more and more in these kinds of cases. CARLOS It’s not their track records I’m worried about, it’s my own. I don’t exactly have a clean record. If the judge wants, he could rule us both unfit and place Angelica in state custody. TYLER I really hope that doesn’t happen, Carlos. I’m a perfect example of what happens to kids in the state system. CARLOS Tyler, don’t say that! You turned out fine! TYLER Did I? My love life has been a mess for a long time now. If that isn’t bad, I shoved Rebecca last night. CARLOS So that’s what happened to you! I’m so sorry, Tyler. TYLER I’m a monster! You’re not supposed to lay your hands on a woman. I’m going to be the guy who’s wife keeps taking him back so he can beat the shit out of her. I really don’t deserve to live. Buff enters. BUFF I’ve got some good news. (seeing Tyler) What’s wrong now? TYLER Just forget about me. I’m not worth the effort. BUFF Maybe this will cheer you up. Scott has a lead on Brandy. CARLOS That’s great! What did he say? BUFF It looks like Dakota is dealing in bootleg gym equipment. He’s sure investigating the operation will uncover a clue to another hide-out. TYLER I don’t even deserve to get Brandy back. EXT. GYM – DAY Liz hangs up her phone and turns to Scott. SCOTT Are you going to tell me? Who are you stopping from doing what? LIZ It’s really none of your business, Scott, but a friend of mine has decided to cheat on his girlfriend of three years. Somehow I have to stop him or he’s going to ruin everything he had with that girl. SCOTT Liz, I’m sorry. This investigation has me a little jumpy. I shouldn’t have jumped to conclusions. LIZ Scott, I told you the FBI can handle this. Why can’t you let them handle the case before you get yourself killed? SCOTT I’m sorry, Liz, but Brandy is my sister. I ruined her life once. I owe it to her to find her and bring her home. Jake comes out from the gym. JAKE The old guy came through for us! She gave us the information we were looking for! Jake hands Scott a piece of paper with an address on it. SCOTT It’s right here in Brighton Falls! JAKE Looks like we’re not moving our offices just yet. Liz has an annoyed look on her face. FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: EXT. ANABOLIC GYM SUPPLY WAREHOUSE – DAY Scott matches the address on the piece of paper with the number on the building. He turns to Liz and Jake. SCOTT Didn’t realize this operation would advertise itself like this. JAKE It’s a front, just like the rest of my dad’s businesses. LIZ Probably sells legit equipment out the front. Listen Scott, why don’t we just tell the FBI about this place and let them investigate it. SCOTT We need to make sure this place is selling the bootleg equipment first. We can’t send the authorities on a wild goose chase or they’ll ignore us the next time we find a lead. INT. ANABOLIC GYM SUPPLY WAREHOUSE – DAY A large open warehouse with small crews loading trucks at the back. By the door, a burly man, BENITO, works on paperwork at his desk. Scott, Jake, and Liz enter. SCOTT Hi. I’m Scott Hutchens. BENITO Benito. What do you want? SCOTT I’m with a small gym in San Tallo, Buff’s Gym. You might know the owner, Buff Barrington. He was a big time bodybuilder in the 80s. BENITO I just sell the equipment. I don’t care who uses it. SCOTT Right. Well, we need to replace a few pieces of equipment. Problem is, membership is down and money is tight. BENITO We do offer payment plans. SCOTT We’ve got ourselves in trouble with debt before. Buff was hoping to buy the stuff outright. That means getting the cheapest stuff you have. Hell, he doesn’t even care if it’s stolen, he just needs something right away. BENITO Hey! I run a legit operation here! SCOTT I didn’t mean to say otherwise. I was just making a joke. JAKE Obviously, Scott’s not very funny. BENITO If you’re looking for cheap stuff, why not buy used? SCOTT That’s why we’ve lost members. Our base wants a gym with new, shiny stuff. A room full of old, used equipment doesn’t portray a very modern picture. BENITO So you need some new gym equipment, but you don’t want to pay a lot for it. I might have what you’re looking for. Just need you to fill this out first. He hands Scott a pen and a form. SCOTT What’s this for? BENITO It’s kind of like a background check to make sure you’re not wasting my time. Scott starts filling out the form. SCOTT No problem. I can assure you we’re serious about his purchase order. INT. BUFF’S LOCKER ROOM – DAY Tyler, Carlos and Buff talk. TYLER Did Scott say where Brandy might be? BUFF He didn’t say. He’s in Brighton Falls now. TYLER Brighton Falls. He turns away in contemplation. CARLOS Tyler, what is it? TYLER Rebecca was living in Brighton Falls before coming here. CARLOS Tyler, don’t even think of trying to get back together with her. Candice was on the run for six years because abusive brother-in-law killed her sister. I know first hand what she went through fearing he’d come for her. Rebecca is better off not worrying about you hitting her. TYLER I don’t want to get back together. I hurt her too much. It’s just that before we day goodbye, I want her to know how sorry I am. I guess I need some closure on this. She probably does too. Candice cracks open the locker room door. CANDICE Carlos, we better get going. We’ve got a lot to do before leaving for that hearing. TYLER Sounds like you’re taking another trip. Where’s the hearing? CARLOS Family court is in Brighton Falls. We’ve got to head out before dawn. TYLER Perfect! Then you don’t mind if I tag along. EXT. SCHOOL – DAY Students pour from the building. Andrew rushes to catch up to Ciel. CIEL What do you want, Andrew? ANDREW I know you don’t trust me anymore, but I’m still worried about you. CIEL Don’t be. I’m hanging out with Brad this afternoon. ANDREW Brad is the one I’m worried about. CIEL Brad has changed! Stop talking about him like he’s the bully he used to be. ANDREW I know he’s changed. He’s desperate to get as much money as he can before next year. I know he works at my brother’s gym, but he won’t make that much money there unless… CIEL Unless what? ANDREW I’ve just heard of some of the other ways to make money in that gym, dangerous ways. CIEL God Andrew! Lay off Brad for once, will you? He hasn’t done anything to you lately. Why can’t you just leave him alone! She storms off towards Brad’s truck parked at the curb. INSIDE BRAD’S TRUCK Brad reaches across the seat to help Ciel inside. BRAD If you want, you can put your purse in the glove compartment. CIEL Thank you, Brad. She opens the glove compartment, sees the ampule. CIEL What’s decadorabolin? BRAD It’s a steroid. Why? Ciel takes the ampule from the glove compartment and shows it to Brad. CIEL Are you doing steroids now? Ciel finds the envelope with the money inside. She takes it and shows it to him. CIEL (continuing) Or are you selling them? FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | Next week: Carlos fights for custody of his daughter, but a from his past blindsides him in court. And in two weeks: Plane crash! |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: INT. CARLOS’ BEDROOM – NIGHT Shirtless Carlos lies in bed. Candice enters wearing a very revealing piece of lingerie. CARLOS You have no idea how nervous I am about this custody hearing. CANDICE Maybe I can help. She unties the lingerie. Carlos pulls her into bed with him. CARLOS It still doesn’t feel real, you and I married. This has to be a dream. CANDICE Only the kind of dream you live. CARLOS So much has happened to both of us. It truly is a miracle I have you in my life. CANDICE No, dear, the miracle is mine. I never dreamed I’d find a man as honorable and as handsome as you are. CARLOS Still, it seems nothing goes right for any of us. It’s like we’re all cursed. CANDICE Don’t talk like that, Carlos. Nothing is going to happen to this marriage. Tomorrow we’ll go to Brighton Falls and win custody. Then we can bring your daughter home and be a real family. No more running, no more fighting, no more surprises. INT. BUFF’S LOBBY – NIGHT Brad skulks at the desk. Buff enters from the hallway. BUFF The place is yours. I’m out. He picks up on Brad’s mood. BUFF (continuing) Is something wrong Brad? BRAD It’s going to be weird telling you this, being my boss and all, but I guess you’re the best person for this problem. BUFF Ask any of the members. I’m here for any of them, and I’m here for you if you have a problem. BRAD Someone set me up in front of Ciel. BUFF In what way? BRAD She found steroids and cash in my glove compartment. I don’t know how they got there cause it wasn’t mine! BUFF So Ciel now thinks you deal drugs. BRAD Wouldn’t you? I just can’t figure out who’s framing me. The only person who comes to mind is Andrew, but where would he get all that money? And why would he even throw it away just to steal Ciel back? BUFF Dakota’s son Andrew? BRAD Yeah. BUFF Maybe the money came from Dakota. He’s gone to some great lengths to hurt some of my friends. From what I hear, he even hurt you. BRAD Yeah, he gave me the Bannon Syndrome and almost killed me. BUFF It’s possible he planted the stuff to help his son. BRAD Thing is how do I prove it? BUFF Brad, you’re better off dropping it. Dakota is a very dangerous man. You survived one encounter with him, you may not get so lucky next time. INT. BIG J LABS – NIGHT Scott hangs up a cell phone and tosses it to Liz. SCOTT Frankie said he’d do some digging and see what he could find out about Anabolic Gym Supply. LIZ Thank God, you decided to let the police handle this. SCOTT You seem awfully concerned about me dropping this. Don’t you want me to find my sister? LIZ Scott, no! It’s not that. I just…I just couldn’t stand it if I lost you too. SCOTT Liz, nothing is going to happen to me. LIZ You were already attacked once! Obviously Dakota knows you’re coming for him. SCOTT And I know he’s coming for me. I can take care of myself. Maybe you better go back to San Tallo with Jake and let me investigate this myself. LIZ No! I can’t let you do this alone. SCOTT Jake could use his assistant on the relocation. LIZ And you could use my help. I need to make sure nothing is going to happen to you. SCOTT Nothing will happen to me. I promise. FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: INT. BIG J LABS – DAY Liz talks on her cell phone. LIZ Are you sure you don’t need us in San Tallo, Jake? All right then, I’ll see you in a few days. She hangs up. A saddened Rebecca enters the doorway. REBECCA Mind if we talk, Liz? LIZ Rebecca! I’m kind of surprised you want to talk with me. We weren’t exactly close friends. REBECCA Well right now, you’re the only friend I have. She enters the room. LIZ What’s the matter? REBECCA It’s Tyler. He shoved me. LIZ Oh dear. Scott enters. SCOTT Almost ready, Liz? Rebecca! What are you doing in Brighton Falls? LIZ Scott, you’ll have to do this without me. Rebecca really needs me right now. SCOTT It’s not Tyler, is it? REBECCA Tyler and I are finished. SCOTT I’m sorry. You two talk, I have a warehouse to visit. He leaves. LIZ Tell me what happened. EXT. BIG J LABS – DAY Scott exits the building as Tyler approaches. TYLER Scott! I’m glad to see you! SCOTT Man, what did you do to Rebecca? TYLER You saw her! Where is she? SCOTT Yeah I saw her. From the looks of things, she doesn’t want to see you though. TYLER It’s my fault, Scott. We got into an argument and I threw her off me. She hit the floor hard. I hurt her, Scott. I need to talk with her. SCOTT That’s not a good idea, Tyler. TYLER I won’t ask her to come back to me. I know she has too much self respect for that. I just want say goodbye. I know she’ll want closure on us. Is she inside? SCOTT With Liz. TYLER Thanks man! Tyler enters the building. SCOTT Tyler, I hope you don’t humiliate yourself in there. INT. COURT ROOM – DAY Carlos and Candice, and Cookie and Dakota are at their places opposite the bench. COOKIE (to Dakota) I needed her here, Dakota! There’s no way I can win this without her here! DAKOTA (to Cookie) Relax, Cookie. You don’t need her. We have enough evidence to bury Carlos without her. The BAILIFF enters. BAILIFF All rise, court is now in session. The Honorable Judge Klendry presiding. A middle-aged, female JUDGE enters and takes the bench. JUDGE Be seated. As everyone sits, The Judge looks over the case file. JUDGE Looks like a routine custody hearing. Miss Walters is the child’s legal guardian. (to Carlos) And you are suing for sole custody. May I ask why you don’t want joint custody? CARLOS That woman is a danger to my daughter. I’m afraid what will happen if she spends another night in that household. JUDGE Tell me why you think this way. CARLOS Cookie lied for months about the baby’s paternity so her boyfriend at the time wouldn’t leave her. She stole another couple’s baby to pass off as her biological daughter so her white boyfriend wouldn’t suspect a thing. COOKIE That is a lie! JUDGE Miss Walters, quiet down! You’ll get your turn. (to Carlos) Go on. CARLOS When I threatened a DNA test to prove paternity, she had Dakota over there kill the nurse on duty when her real baby was brought in, and they framed me to get me out of the picture. DAKOTA There is no proof of that, your honor. JUDGE I told your wife to be quiet. The same goes for you. CARLOS When that failed, she kidnapped her own daughter and set up a whole Susan Smith scenario. It ended where our daughter disappeared in the river along with Dakota and another woman. We thought they were dead, but Dakota had gotten the baby to safety and kept her hidden. The San Tallo police have all of this on report which is in your file. JUDGE I see that now. (to Cookie) What do you have to say about all this? COOKIE I did not steal a baby! That couple agreed to let me adopt their girl. But they never filed the papers! They changed their minds and got their daughter back. As for Angelica, I never kidnapped her. I mean how can you kidnap your own daughter? I had full custody at the time! As for the accident at the river, that would never have happened if the nurse’s real killer hadn’t gone all psycho and tried to frame my husband for the murder. JUDGE And what about the police report? You and Dakota are both implicated in an awful lot of crimes, some are federal offenses. DAKOTA I can answer that, your honor. It stems back to a rivalry between me and Carlos and his friends back when I owned a competing gym. They could never best me in business, so they made up all kinds of lies to the police. CARLOS That’s a lie! JUDGE (to Carlos) Be quiet! It’s their turn to talk! CARLOS But Dakota is lying! DAKOTA (to Cookie) I told you we didn’t need her. COOKIE (to Dakota) It’s going to take a lot more than this to convince the judge to side with us. FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: INT. SCHOOL HALLWAY – DAY Andrew opens his locker and grabs his books. Ciel approaches. ANDREW Ciel! I thought you hated me. CIEL I did, but you were right about Brad. He’s selling steroids at that gym. ANDREW Do you forgive me then? CIEL I’m not ready to go that far, Andrew. After what your dad did to Brad this summer, it’s going to take a lot of convincing. ANDREW I keep telling you I had nothing to do with that. I didn’t even know he was up to something. You have to believe me Ciel. I’m nothing like my dad. I’m still the same boy you fell in love with last year. CIEL I hope so, Andrew. If I find out you’ve done something against Brad, I’ll never forgive you. ANDREW You don’t have to worry about that. Why not come to practice after school and I’ll show you. We can hang out after. INT. BIG J LABS – DAY Liz comforts a sobbing Rebecca. LIZ I’m so sorry Rebecca. But I have to ask; are you really sure it’s over? I mean he forgave you when you lied about being Miles’ sister, and about what happened at school. Is there any way you can forgive him for this? REBECCA How can I, Liz? It’s not like he ruined a pair of shoes! LIZ I know, but you said he pushed you off him. He didn’t actually hit you, right? REBECCA He might as well have! You didn’t see the rage in his eyes. You didn’t feel his full force shoving you to the floor. No, Tyler didn’t hit me, though he may as well have! It’s probably only a matter of time before he does. LIZ I’m sorry. I didn’t mean. REBECCA No, you were being a friend. More than I can say about me. I’m so sorry I told you to leave San Tallo. LIZ Don’t think twice about it. Tell me what you plan to do. You didn’t come all the way to Brighton Falls to talk to me. REBECCA No. Actually, I’m going back to school. It’s time I got my degree and got on with my life. Tyler steps into the doorway. TYLER I want to help you do that Rebecca. INT. COURT ROOM – DAY The Judge pounds on the gavel. JUDGE I want order! Carlos, Candice, Cookie, and Dakota turn their attention to the Judge. JUDGE (continuing) I’m done with the criminal charges! Both parties can fight all they want about it, but this court recognizes that nothing came from any of the charges. I want to know who’s more capable of raising this child. CARLOS I can answer that. JUDGE I’ll decide who answers! (to Cookie) Miss Walters, why do you think you’re capable of raising this child? COOKIE Your honor, my husband has a lot of money. So much, in fact, that I don’t have to work. I can be a stay at home mother to my child, something Carlos can’t do. JUDGE (to Dakota) And what do you do that you have a lot of money. Dakota chuckles. DAKOTA Cookie exaggerates a little. I was a professional bodybuilder a little more than twenty years ago. I was able to save quite a bit from my endorsement contracts. After that, I went on the road as a magician. The act was successful enough where I didn’t have to touch my savings. Eventually I opened a gym which was even more successful. That burned down and I put the insurance money into a supplement shop. When that was destroyed, I helped my son invest his money, for a small percentage, but it was enough to ensure financial independence. Still, I miss my gym and have been working on rebuilding it. Dakota’s Dungeon should be open in time for New Years. JUDGE (to Carlos) Your turn to convince me. CARLOS I’m a very successful personal trainer at Buff’s Gym. COOKIE Ha! Anyone can tell someone to stick a needle in their ass. JUDGE (to Cookie) You had your chance. Now be quiet! CARLOS You have my tax returns to show you how successful I am. About a year and a half ago, I entered a partnership to buy the gym. Personal issues forced us to sell it back earlier this year, but I walked away with a good chunk of change. As for parenting, neither Cookie or I have been able to spend much time with Angelica, but my wife Candy raised her nephew for six years. Dakota has three kids and he can’t say the same. He has three kids by three different women, and each one was left with their mom while he moved on with another woman. DAKOTA Your honor, if I may. JUDGE (to Dakota) Go ahead. DAKOTA My first son was put up for adoption because I was too young. We were in high school. We were young. We were stupid. We didn’t want the boy to suffer for our mistakes so we let him go so that a real family could give him a real life. And the others? Yeah, I was still young and reckless, but I could have been a father and provided for them if I had known. JUDGE So you’re saying these women didn’t tell you they were pregnant. DAKOTA Who would you rather say is your son’s father? An oiled up muscle-head, or a computer programmer with a regular nine to five job? Since I’ve been married to Cookie, I’ve been a father to Angelica and I’ve been able to provide for her needs. Cookie and I can give her a stable home. Carlos on the other hand… CARLOS (to Dakota) I can’t wait to hear this one! JUDGE (to Carlos) Quiet! COOKIE (to Dakota) You’re going to tell them? But she’s not here! DAKOTA (to Cookie) We can’t help that. It’s now or never. JUDGE (to Dakota) Go on Dakota. What did you have to add about Carlos? Colleen enters the courtroom. COLLEEN Carlos has two wives. He’s still married to me, your honor. Everyone turns to the back of the courtroom. CANDICE Colleen? Dakota smiles. Cookie takes out her camera and snaps a picture of Carlos’ shocked face. FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: INT. ANABOLIC GYM SUPPLY – DAY Benito shows Scott some gym equipment. SCOTT These are top of the line brands. We can’t afford this. BENITO But yes you can, my friend. See, we buy massive close-out lots from the manufacturer. We get the stuff cheap so we can sell it to you cheap. Think of us like a car dealer. We’re blowing out last year’s models to make way for next year’s. SCOTT Makes sense. Let me talk with the boss and come up with a final purchase order. I’ll have an answer for you by tomorrow. They shake hands. BENITO It’ll be a pleasure doing business with you. INT. BIG J LABS – DAY Liz leaves Rebecca to talk with Tyler. LIZ This isn’t a good idea coming here, Tyler. TYLER I have to talk with Rebecca. I have to make this right between us. LIZ You can’t make this right. REBECCA Liz, just let him in. Tyler steps into the room. TYLER Rebecca, I know what I did was wrong—- REBECCA Wrong? What you did was more than wrong; it was evil! You know, I used to see the battered woman on television shows and think that was never going to be me. I was going to find a guy who would respect me enough to talk through our problems, a guy I could work with to resolve any arguments we would have. Tyler, when I met you, I found my dream. You were not only a guy who respected me and could forgive me for anything I did wrong; you also had a nice body. You were that one in a million guy. But you’ve been under a lot of stress lately and instead of dealing with it, you let it destroy you. I know you’re sorry for what happened, but the bottom line is so aren’t they all. Next time it won’t be just a shove. Next time you’re going to hurt me. If I have any self respect left, I need to walk away from this before I really get hurt. TYLER I know Rebecca. I’m not asking you to come back to me. REBECCA You’re what? TYLER I didn’t come to make excuses or ask you to come back. I came to give you closure. I figured giving you the chance to vent so we could say proper goodbyes would help us both sleep better at night. There’s no excuse for what I did. You deserve better and I really hope you find it, Rebecca. I really hope you find a guy who can respect you and treat you like a queen. REBECCA You really mean that. TYLER Of course I do. REBECCA Thank you. She hugs him. REBECCA (continuing) I really hope you find Brandy and make things right with her. TYLER Thank you. INT. COURT ROOM – DAY Carlos turns from Colleen to Cookie CARLOS What is Colleen doing here? CANDICE Looks like she’s out to sabotage your custody. Cookie checks the counter on her camera. COOKIE Shoot! Out of film! DAKOTA You brought your camera to the hearing? COOKIE Of course! I wanted a picture of Carlos’ face when he lost this hearing. Seems I won’t get that picture, but the look on his face when Colleen showed up was worth it. Colleen approaches the bench. JUDGE What is the meaning of this? Who are you? COLLEEN My name’s Colleen and I’m Carlos’ wife. CARLOS That’s impossible, your honor. I mean I was married to her, but the marriage was annulled two years ago! COLLEEN (to the Judge) I thought so too, (to Carlos) But apparently someone changed his mind. CARLOS Are you trying to get back at me after all this time? Those papers were signed! COLLEEN (to Carlos) But they were never sent in! You fought with me, you made me sign those papers so you could be with your baby’s trampy mother. But you never sent them in! CARLOS That’s a lie! Colleen hands the judge a paper. COLLEEN According to the State of Nevada, the marriage is still valid. They have no record of the annulment papers ever reaching them. JUDGE I’m calling a recess to investigate this. Since I’ve heard enough from both parties, I’ll come back with my decision. Court is recessed for 30 minutes. BAILIFF All rise. Everyone stands. The Judge leaves. Carlos approaches Colleen. CARLOS Why are you doing this? COLLEEN Because if I ever want to get married, this has to be straightened out. CARLOS There’s nothing to straighten out. We are not married! COLLEEN I thought so too until Cookie showed up at my room. CARLOS This is making sense now. He storms to Cookie and Dakota. CARLOS (continuing) You two are setting me up, hoping this stunt will give you custody. The judge isn’t stupid. She’ll find out about your ruse. When she learns my marriage to Colleen was annulled, she’ll grant me custody. DAKOTA I assure you Carlos, we had nothing to do with this. I mean, yes, Cookie did find out about this and she did track Colleen down, but everything Colleen said is true. I didn’t manufacture anything. This was all you. COOKIE If you’ll excuse me, I have 30 minutes to find a one-hour photomat. Cookie leaves. Carlos returns to Candice. CANDICE You know what this means, Carlos. If she’s telling the truth and you two really are still married, then our marriage is invalid. FADE OUT. |
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Recipes: 0 Rep Power: 12 | FADE IN: EXT. HIGH SCHOOL FOOTBALL FIELD – DAY Ciel watches the team practice from the sideline. A sweat-soaked Andrew jogs over to her. ANDREW Do I turn you on? CIEL That the only reason you invited me to practice? ANDREW I kind of hoped. CIEL I might have forgiven you Andrew, but it’s going to take some time to trust you again. ANDREW Our relationship is a lot like this football team. CIEL So you’re in love with all of them too? ANDREW No! That’s not what I meant, Ciel! I mean, everyone has high opinions of the quarterback out there. It’s him who wins the game and it’s his fault if the team loses. He can throw perfect passes the whole game, but if I fumble them, if I miss his pass, it’s still his fault for some reason. Except in our relationship I’m the quarterback and my dad was the one who dropped the ball. CIEL I understand that Andrew. What you have to understand is I need to know you’re not like your dad. We can’t have a future if you’re anything like him. ANDREW You don’t have to worry, Ciel. I haven’t done anything bad to ruin us. EXT. BIG J LABS – DAY Scott meets Liz as she leaves the building. SCOTT How did it go in there? LIZ Scott, you knew Tyler was here? SCOTT He just wanted to talk with Rebecca before letting her go. LIZ So he’s not here to get her back? SCOTT Not that he told me. He respects her too much to pull her back into a bad relationship. LIZ Of course he respects her now. Where was that respect the other night? SCOTT He said it was an accident. The whole thing has been blown out of proportion. LIZ He hit her! SCOTT He pushed her off him. There’s a difference. LIZ That still doesn’t excuse him! SCOTT I know. I hope he really is letting her go. LIZ Me too. So how did it go with you? SCOTT Great, Liz! I got to see some samples. They are definitely dealing bootleg equipment. As soon as Frankie gets back to me with a list of their property holdings, we can look for Brandy. LIZ What makes you think she’s not at that warehouse? SCOTT It’s too small. Besides that, it’s too high profile. More than likely they have a place in the country where they can process the fake equipment quietly. LIZ I still think this is a bad idea, Scott. SCOTT And I still that that’s not going to stop me. INT. COURT ROOM – DAY Everyone stands at their places except for Cookie who is absent. Colleen has a seat in the audience. The Judge takes the bench. JUDGE Be seated. Everyone sits. JUDGE (continuing) Where is Miss Walters? Did she forget what a recess is? Cookie runs into the court room and takes her seat. COOKIE Sorry your honor. I got held up running an errand. JUDGE You got here just in time. It seems that the story of our surprise guest checks out. Carlos is still married to Colleen. CARLOS That can’t be! JUDGE But it is. And that means your marriage to Candice is invalid. But that’s not a matter for this court. What is our matter is the subject of custody and who would make the better parent. Honestly Carlos, with your love life such a mess, I can’t imagine how things would turn out with your child. I am denying your petition for custody. Cookie and Dakota jump up excited. CANDICE What’s happening to us, Carlos? CARLOS I don’t know, but I have an idea. He looks to Colleen. FADE OUT. |